本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一篇演讲稿

【题目】假设你是红星中学高一(1)班学生李华。你准备参加学校举办的“我心目中的英雄”演讲比赛，请围绕下面内容，写一篇演讲稿：

1. 我心目中的英雄；

2. 我选择他/她作为心目中的英雄的原因；

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【答案】The hero in my heart

My father is the hero in my heart. He is an ordinary person, but he is very special in my heart. He is very brave, hard-working and responsible. I am afraid of mouse; my father will stand out to help me drive it out. It is funny to watch him fighting with mouse. He is not only caring for me, but also looking after of my grandparents. He is glad to do this and never complain. As for his job, he works very hard. Sometimes the uncle working with my father will praise him in front of me. My dad is the hero in my mind. I want to be a person like him when I grow up.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一篇演讲稿。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一篇演讲稿；假设你是红星中学高一(1)班学生李华，你准备参加学校举办的“我心目中的英雄”演讲比赛，写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：我心目中的英雄；我选择他/她作为心目中的英雄的原因。人称应为第一人称、第三人称，时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：an ordinary person（一个普通人），brave, hard-working and responsible（勇敢、勤奋和负责人），not only…but also…（不但……而且……）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。