
留学简历虚构一些可以么你好!
你的问题不太好回答可以还是不可以。如果你能不仅能虚构出经历,还能提供你的虚构佐证材料。回答是可以的,否则,还不如老老实实。譬如,你虚构自己参加了一个敬老院的自愿者活动。那么,最好能做到:
1.敬老院可以提供相应的证明材料。
2.如果学校打电话到敬老院随意问到某个人的时候,他们能够配合你,回答的天衣无缝。出国留学的简历有些不真实,自己将自己的经历组合了组合,美化了一下,并不是100%真实的,会有影响吗?会的,中国学生学历造假是美国招生官最忌讳的事情,尤其是是面试的时候,招生官会问到简历上的内容,一旦被他们察觉,你就out了。
适当美化是可以的,但事情一定要是真的,美化可以从你个人对事情的思考来下手,因为你做什么事不重要,重要的是你是怎么看待你做的事情的,所以这不是简单的事件组合和堆砌,思想才是你简历的精髓。所以这里的美化说的是你做简历的角度和深度,而绝非造假。
可以找资深的文案老师协助你完成这部分工作,相信你在这期间也能对自我有一个全新的认识。请问办交换留学签证时,父母没有工作单位,不能提供在职证明怎么办,伪造一张能行吗,会不会查??
您未具体说明办理的是哪国的留学签证,其次建议不要伪造在职证明。国外非常看重个人信用,如果造假一经发现,会被立即遣返回国,留下记录并在一定期限内不允许申请该国的任何类别签证。
根据美领馆对F1签证材料的要求,父母的工作证明并非必要文件,只是提供给签证官了解父母有正式的收入来源而不会动用担保金。所以合理的向签证官解释担保金的情况即可。
如果父母有自己的公司,提供营业执照、资金流水等材料;如果是租房等其他形式,可以提供租房合同等等。以此来解释父母的收入来源。
大一退学考SAT,准备一年后去美国,关于文书的准备问题和
美国大学的问题。1.SAT1很重要,算是基础吧,考得越高越保险了。1800是50~40名左右的大学,往上平均每上升100分,可以填报的大学排名上升10名,前十的大学2100+基本可以了,有的要2200比较保险;当然不一定综合排名代表的是它的专业水平,比如加州大学的几个分校都相当强大,UCB,UCLA等撇开经济实力不堪起码全美前十。
PS超级重要,怎么说呢,就像那种逆转牌一样,虽然不一定中靶,但万一发挥效果了就比SAT分数管用的多。一些学生虽然SAT考得不高,但是文书写得感人就被录了,还有些学生虽然分数很高,但内心空洞,被大学连拒的都有。
GPA,那也很重要……但是相比上面的两个可操作性较大。我的意思是说……如果你和学校的关系好的话可以改。我见过好多人改,气死了~~~!不过嘛,如果该了被发现的后果会很严重……
2.都可以,体现个人精神和闪光点最重要,形式内容无所谓
3.可以的话就伪吧,和自己的专业要相关,当然最好还是做个两天了解一下,以免露马脚,发现就死惨了(我在教别人什么呀……)
4.用处其实……不大,除非你是患了什么重度昏迷或是脑震荡把学的都忘了
5.大两岁没关系,我见过20岁考SAT上本科的。如果你是大二的话,建议你考GRE再转,比SAT难些,你可以咨询下新东方的人
6.你认为的eccentric未必在别人眼里就eccentric,或是eccentric和unique还是有区别的。毕竟仅通过一纸文书或一次面试(有的学校还不安排面试)无法真实的全面的了解一个人。不要说你很特别,而要通过PS把自己的特别表现出来
7.抱歉不大清楚,但是我知道的有医学和金融。好像读到博士他们就会给你主动发绿卡了
8.抱歉这个不大清楚,每个学校不同吧。
但一般私立学校学费3万$一年,公立会便宜1万$左右,文理学院则要贵约1万$左右。但是文理学院的本科教育公认是普遍顶尖的,不过在美国人眼里也算是贵族学校了。加上生活费的话,一年可能还要3000$。
9.会有,但是要知道,真正起作用的不是scholarship(奖学金)而是fundaid(助学金),fundaid的数量相比scholarship都是十几倍几十倍的关系。而fundaid很多私立学校都会根据家庭情况主动给你,申请的时候最好不要提奖学金,因为同样条件的学生学校会优先录取不要奖学金的(这个你该想得通)
10.SATII你学理科的话相当容易,我准备了3天考了2400(好孩子请勿模仿)。保险的话主要把专业词汇背下,做些真题(网上有卖)。一般复习两周左右就能有2300以上了吧
文书的话你可以找专业的中介机构,他们比较专业会把全部流程跟你讲清楚,帮你做材料,一般价格在(6~15万)比如可以到新东方咨询下,还有北京啄木鸟之类的。
大一这一年盖不盖掉要具体分析,因为说不定某些在大学这一年的经历很宝贵,很能体现你的个人精神品质也说不定。具体你跟中介说明吧~
祝你申请顺利啊~~
(手酸酸酸……)在出国留学文书中如何描述工作经历留学个人陈述PS是Perso
nal
Statement的简称,是我们申请美国研究生院的重要材料之一。一份完美的PS有可能使你申请成功的机会大大增加,同时PS也是很好的认识你自己的过程。通过写PS,你将更了解你自己,清楚自己想要什么样的生活,理清自己为什么要去美国,以后将要成为什么样的人。
这对申请者来说至关重要,对admission
officer来说,PS是你唯一有机会向他们展示一个鲜活的你的材料。成绩单是死的,GRE和TOEFL分数是死的,而他们要找的是一个活生生的人,是一个有血有肉有思想的人,他们在众多的申请者中寻找最适合他们的那一位,你如何认识你自己?你的motivation来自哪里?你将来如何打算?这些东西都可以帮助他们走进你,了解你,认识你,然后决定是不是接受你。
U of Washington的admission officer指出,他们会把申请者分成四等:"Admit with guaranteed
funding, Admit with potential funding, Tabled (a sort of admissions purgatory),
and Reject." It is in the case of "Tabled" and "Admit with potential funding"
applications, the admissions officer reports, that the perso
nal statement can
make a real difference: "If there is a good match between the applicant's
research interests and the particular strengths of the school, this can bump
them up a level or two in the hierarchy of admission."
如何写留学个人陈述?从PS教程中,我将总结出写PS的各项注意点,一步步教你怎么写PS,希望对大家有所帮助。
Preparation
PS的精髓在于将自己的motivation和Objective充分展现出来,它应该是perso
naland analytical,
任何generalization都需要避免,PS的关键在于用specific, perso
nal
details来展现你的个人魅力和强烈的motivation。
写PS时,要尽量完全的真诚。这是诉说一个你自己的故事,你不是在设法创造一个理想的申请者,而是just be
yourself。任何的伪造都是很容易被识破的,只有完全敞开的真诚,才能真正打动admission
officer,也才能真正的认识你自己,才能真正让你选择最适合你的graduate program。
用specific details来展现你的motivation很重要。这些specific
details可以包括研究和工作经历、课程、你跟你所感兴趣的领域的人的交流、你读的书、你参加的学术报告会,以及任何可以展现你为何选择并适合这个研究领域的原因。
你需要明确你未来的方向,至少为自己未来5~10年的事业做一个规划,而这个规划应该很适合你所申请的这个graduate
program,那也正是你选择这个领域的原因。
描述为什么这个graduate program适合你,不要用一些空洞的赞美性的语言,一定要be specific, be
analytical。
一定不要出现一些粗心的错误,那只能证明你不够认真对待。
避免说一些空洞无意义的套话,避免陈词滥调。这里可以举个例子。
修改前:In the first project Imanaged, I learned many valuable lessons a
bout
the im
portance of teamwork.
修改后:In the first project Imanaged, I made an effort to incorporate all my
colleagues as equal members ofa team, soliciting their feedback and deferring to
their expertise as needed.
修改前的这句话很空洞的讲team
work,没有任何details;修改后的话就展开讲了我是怎么展现teamwork的。在写PS的时候一定要注意展开这些细节。最好的方法就是以自己的亲身经历开始,让那些展现你的quality和personality的东西自然流露出来,你的那些品质不需要总结性的generalities,
人们会从你对自己经历的specific details的描述判断出你有哪些quality。
不要企图把你所有的经历都写进PS里,PS追求的不是广度,而是深度。好的PS是深入挖掘一个或两个主题、时间或观点的细节。
注意避免敏感话题,因为你不知道admission officer的个人偏见。
不要用冗余的长句。短句更加有力,因为他们更加direct和to the point。举例:
修改前:"My recognitio
nof the fact that the project was finally over was a
deeply satisfying momentthat will forever linger in my memory."
修改后:"Completing theproject at last gave me an enduring sense of
fulfillment."
像the fact that这种词就是完全冗余的。
Brainstorming
1. Performa self-inventory of Your Unique Experiences, Major Influences,
and Abilities.
Long and short term goals
1. 这所学校为什么吸引你
2. 你对哪个faculty的研究最感兴趣?你最想跟谁一起工作?
3. 你具体想从你所申请的program中获得什么?
4. 你的事业抱负是什么?这个graduate program对你实现事业理想有什么帮助?
5. 你理想的工作的是什么?未来的5~10年甚至20、30年,你想成为一个什么样的人?
Skills and Characteristics
6. 你有哪些品质有助于你在该领域获得成功?You need to make strong co
nnections between your
experiences and the qualities you wish to convey.
这里列举一些admission officer认为很重要的qualities:
? Seriousness of Purpose (to pursue graduate education)
? Intellectual Ability (to handle graduate study)
? Intellectual Curiosity (a
bout the field you wish to enter)
? Creativity (as reflected in the way your mind addresses issues in the
field of your choice)
? Open-Mindedness (to ideas, people, and circumstances different from your
own)
? Maturity (as demo
nstrated by being respo
nsible and trustworthy)
? Co
ncern for Others (either by devoting time to social service activities
such as tutoring or by being co
nsiderate and empathetic to others' feelings; the
latter is more difficult to pull off in an application essay)
? Initiative (as in the ability to start a project or take on a
respo
nsibility on your own)
? Enthusiasm (as demo
nstrated by your eagerness to engage in
activities)
? Co
nfidence (in your ability to handle difficult situations and novel
challenges)
? Being Organized (as in the ability to stay on top of multiple tasks)
? Sense of Humor (as in your ability to find humor in difficult situations;
in many ways this is an index of maturity)
? Diligence/Persistence (as demo
nstrated by your ability to stay with a
task until you complete it; this is particularly relevant for programs requiring
a dissertation)
? Leadership (as shown in your ability to inspire others to work together
to reach a mutual goal)
? Risk Taking (as shown in your ability to deal with uncertainty in order
to reach your goal)
? Insight (as reflected in your ability to use introspection to understand
aspects of yourself, such as your preferences and your motivations)
? Optimism (as reflected in your ability to find positive aspects in
seemingly negative situations)
? Compromise (as in your ability to be flexible in negotiating with others;
at a more abstract level this can mean the ability to reco
ncile ideological
opposites or dialectical pairs among others or within yourself)
? Overcoming Adversity (as demo
nstrated by your resourcefulness in dealing
with serious problems such as divorce, death, illness, etc.)
7. 你所拥有的skills(比如communication,leadership, analytical),注意用specific
details来展示你的这些skills
8. 你比其他申请者的优势在哪里?
9. 你可以贡献给你所申请的学校哪些东西?(给你的fellow students,你的faculty,你的broader community)
10. 你认为你为什么会在这个program的申请中胜出?
11.让admission officers对你感兴趣的最compelling的原因是什么?
Background/Accomplishments: Personal
12. What's special, unique, distinctive, or impressive a
bout you or your
life story? What details of your life (perso
nal or family problems/history, any
genuinely notable accomplishments, people or events that have shaped you or
influenced your goals) might help the committee better understand you or help
set you apart from other applicants? 哪些人影响了你的选择?
13. Have you had to overcome any unusual obstacles or hardships (e.g.,
economic, familial, physical) in your life? 你所必须克服的困难?
14. Have you borne significant care-giving respo
nsibilities for family
members? For an ailing parent, a sibling, a disabled or aging relative, a child?
How has this impacted your academics? Your professio
nal life? Your goals and
values? 你从小就需要照顾什么人吗?囧,这点对独生子女不利哎。
15. (If you live in U.S. but are not a native-born American) How did you
deal with the challenges of moving to the U.S. from your home? Did you
experience culture shock? How did you adapt? What was most difficult for you?
What aspects of your new home did you enjoy the most?
在美国如何适应的问题,看来美国交流经历还在这个personal方面可以起到一些作用~
16. If work experiences have co
nsumed significant periods of time during
your college years, what have you learned (leadership or managerial skills, for
example), and how has the work co
ntributed to your perso
nal growth?
Background/Accomplishments: Academic
17. When did you originally become interested in this field? What have you
since learned a
bout it-and a
bout yourself-that has further stimulated your
interest and reinforced your co
nviction that you are well suited to this field?
What insights have you gained? 你如何对这个领域感兴趣的?
18. How have you learned a
bout this field-through classes, readings,
seminars, work or other experiences, or co
nversations with people already in the
field?
19. Are there any gaps or discrepancies in your academic record that you
should explain?
20. Can you recall a specific incident that co
nvinced you that you had
chosen the right career path?用一个具体的事例来证明你为何选择了正确的道路
2. Co
nsult Friends, Relatives, Colleagues, or Professors for Ideas
别人往往可以看到你性格特征中你自己没有注意到的地方,所以向别人请教可以帮助你更好地了解自己。不妨来做一个调查问卷,向了解你的请教~
I am applying to _________ and must prepare a perso
nal statement as a part
of that process. I want to be sure to include all relevant data a
bout myself and
my background, so I am soliciting information from various individuals who know
me and whose judgment I value. Thank you for your help.
1. What do you think is most im
portant for the admissions committee to know
a
bout me?
2. What do you regard as most unusual, distinctive, unique, and/or
impressive a
bout me (ba
sed on our association)?
3. Are you aware of any events or experiences in my background that might
be of particular interest to those co
nsidering my application to graduate
school?
4. Are there any special qualities or skills that I possess that tend to
make you think I would be successful in graduate school and in the field to
which I aspire to become a part?